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Conejillo

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09-Hogar prisión

¡Derideal ahora actualiza Lunes y Miércoles!

LA historia de Alfa continua en esta nueva misión para el Consorcio!
gracias por leer Derideal!
este episodio se hizo originalmente hace 5 años atrás más o menos, las siguientes páginas han sido revisadas y retocadas para que funcionen mejor con la versión remake del comic…
recuerden, la historia de Derideal esta lejos aún de terminar!

No les recomiendo leer la version «Legacy» más allá del episodio 5, o se harán spoiler de la historia que sigue aquí.

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Luposian

3 years ago

That’s «You and I», not «You and me.» Bad grammer will be punished! Now, off to the corner of the litterbox with you missus kitty! 😀

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Conejillo

3 years ago

Reply to Luposian

Very interesting, as you know, the original comic is written in Spanish and just some people proof read my English translation and send me corrections in the discord channel. I’ll see if I can fix the text soon once I confirm

Linebyline

3 years ago

Reply to Conejillo

For what it’s worth, it’s true that «You and I» would be correct in this situation, but a lot of people will say «you and me» anyway. (And a lot of people overcorrect and always say «you and I» even when «you and me» would be correct.) Strictly speaking, you use whichever one you would use if you didn’t have the «you and»: If Alpha didn’t exist, Ivory would say, «I am the only Xeno there is,» so to include him, she’d say, «You and I are the only Xenos there are.» On the other hand, if she would say… Read more »

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Conejillo

3 years ago

Reply to Linebyline

I’ll try to fix it tbh, I hope to get the text in good grammar, mostly because I can’t really pretend to make accents when I’m originally writing this in some neutral spanish.
if you sometime find text that could be fixed, please let me know, too!

Linebyline

3 years ago

Reply to Conejillo

Will do. Just know that being able to communicate in multiple languages is really impressive, for those of us who never learned a second language. (One of these days, I keep telling myself…)

Linebyline

3 years ago

Interesting. Looking forward to finding out whether she’s right, and what that means. That, and whether that grenade makes sure they don’t get any more information from their new friend.

D3fa1t1

2 years ago

Either Ivory is trying to hide something, or she doesnt know any better…

Exciting!

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Conejillo

2 years ago

Reply to D3fa1t1

slim chances she knows something–!

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