Living in a dream? Why does that make it sound like a certain machine is currently being used on her? I’m guessing she wasn’t ever given proper food while living with the mice and might have ended up giving into base instincts to survive, resulting in her current situation. But if she’s realizing something isn’t right… then, if she’s really hooked up to the machine; I don’t think it’s working as the Consortium thinks it is(again if this takes place after Alpha, Ivory, and Laura escaped). It’s almost like the mind is more complicated, and resilient, than the Consortium seems… Read more »

veo un par de errores en la version en ingles
“I must make sense to all these mementos!” deberia ser “I must make sense of all of these mementos!”
“we reached the interlude isnt it?” deberia ser “we reached the interlude didnt we?”