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16-Under the Rain

the “Under the Rain” episode! this will be a very important episode! so stay tunned!

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Felix the Manul
Felix the Manul
17 days ago

“Would you kindly…”

Felix the Manul
Felix the Manul
17 days ago

Powerful phrase. Familiar phrase?
A man chooses, a slave obeys…

Felix the Manul
Felix the Manul
15 days ago

This quote from game called Bioshock fits this whole slavery situation well, isn’t it?

As long as nobody end up with a golf club stuck in the head.

Someone
Someone
17 days ago

So, am I wrong for imaging two scientists commanding a fight between Xenos like a Pokémon battle?

Avrguy
Avrguy
17 days ago

Feels kinda weird, especially laura’s shocked reaction after the command, like the command acting in instinctual level and not actually controlling it and simply obeying, interesting…

Sin of Avarice
Sin of Avarice
17 days ago

But all they’ve been shown doing is messing with her memories? How is messed up memories resulting in a her suddenly being unable to resist commands?

Unless things are being done off frame again and the readers are just expected to know these things.

As much as I love this web comic, the plot holes are getting bigger by the page.

Linebyline
Linebyline
16 days ago
Reply to  Sin of Avarice

I don’t think it’s a plot hole. I mean, it’s an experimental technology to begin with and its explicitly stated goal is total control. Considering that its first use (that we saw) was reconstituting Aden’s brain from a hamburger-like state, it stands to reason that it does more than just implant false memories. Frankly, a lot of things are probably much easier to do than technologically implant a detailed false memory with all the sensory details involved. (Admittedly, false memories aren’t *that* hard to do through more traditional brainwashing techniques; see also, gaslighting. Which the Consortium also does a lot.)… Read more »

Sin of Avarice
Sin of Avarice
17 days ago

Why do I get the feeling the order is going to involve Laura attacking Berit?

Linebyline
Linebyline
16 days ago

My read on CWally is that there’s no length he wouldn’t go to on principle if he thought (a) it would achieve his goals and (b) he could get away with it. It’s just that neither of these things seems to be the case right now. Probably wouldn’t even cross his mind. But that doesn’t mean he doesn’t have feelings or respect for anyone else or that he’d hurt someone without reason. Which, if you ask me, is much more interesting than someone who would just screw over anyone anytime. Who knows? Maybe even he doesn’t know what lines he’d… Read more »

Joshofspam
Joshofspam
17 days ago

Interesting, I wonder if this kind of conditioning might have gradual bad effects on a xeno as they get older?

I’ve guessed that time and experiences might have a gradual effect on the conditioning. Like giving a xeno to a sadistic owner might eventually override the programing and trigger a flight or fight reaction. But that order Berit gave seemed to have left an impression on Laura on its own.

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